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Subject: My sweetest friend.
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i.am.reign 18.05.19 - 04:47pm
The greenest eyes,
the sweetest smile,
We'd often sit and talk a while,
About music, films and things we'd seen,
We even shared our crazy dreams,
You truly were my sweetest friend,
I thought you'd be there till the end,
You made me say that I loved you,
And even though that still is true,
I know that you don't feel it too,
For me that is the biggest shame,
I only wish you felt the same,
So many wasted years,
Kept apart by silly fears,
And then one day by sheer fate,
I said I loved you but you felt hate,
I'd shown my feelings oh so late,
Even though hard I tried,
Your love for me had long since died,
You didn't feel the same as me,
But couldn't give me honesty,
And so I sit all alone,
Staring at a silent phone,
Even though my life is barren,
You will always be my Darren. *
i.am.reign 18.05.19 - 04:56pm
To give context to the last line, Darren is my crush's crush. *
9362 19.05.19 - 07:56pm
Nice but I would try and rewrite the last line. Gives the impression that you are missing a boyfriend called Darren *
i.am.reign 19.05.19 - 08:18pm
That's why the reply, for the person I wrote about it's clear, for anyone else it looks the way you say, but what's written is written *
